Way to go, Adam. Cole deserved that. But I have a sneaky feeling that we haven't seen the last of him. Enjoyed this story.
Reviews For "A NEW GENERATION"
Kate is a lot more gracoius than I am. I'd have just let his body rot. He was wicked and evil and I'm glad he's out of their lives. But I do worry about Cole. Don't think we have seen the last of him. Enjoying every moment of this.
Date: 08/15/10 - 08:12 pm [Report This]
It's uncanny how Hop Sing knows everything. Wish I had a Hop Sing to watch over me.
Date: 08/15/10 - 07:22 pm [Report This]
Adam and Kate are going to be great parents. great job of forshadowing by having Kate feel uneasy.
Date: 08/12/10 - 08:32 pm [Report This]
Nothing worse than a sick man. I like the concern Adam shows for Kate, even though he's sick.
Date: 08/12/10 - 06:18 pm [Report This]
Thank you, thank you. I was delighted to find the continuation of your series, and hope you will do more. You are a truly gifted writer. The characterization and diaglog is right on. A perfect ten!
Date: 08/03/10 - 10:52 am [Report This]
This was a great story!!! Bravo to the writer!! Kept me glued to the computer all day (and I was at work). The writing was so true to the characters, I felt like I was back at the ranch with the original crew. Thanks so much for the great effort. I hope to read more from you!
Date: 07/28/10 - 09:42 pm [Report This]
Looking forward to more of Adam, Kate and Aaron's lives together! Thanks for this story!
Date: 07/27/10 - 09:43 pm [Report This]
The danger is gone, I hope! Poor Kate. Good thing she has Adam and the rest of the Cs.
Date: 07/27/10 - 09:42 pm [Report This]
I'm glad the Cs appreciate Hop Sing - he is amazing, always there for them.
And John - he needs to be taught a lesson!
Date: 07/27/10 - 09:40 pm [Report This]
What a great group of chapters! So much happening. Thank you for a wonderful story!
Date: 07/27/10 - 09:39 pm [Report This]
"John" spells trouble in my book! Great stuff!
Date: 07/26/10 - 09:21 pm [Report This]
Yea! Adam's my hero. Great story, can't wait for Adam, Kate and Aaron's next adventure.
Date: 07/25/10 - 01:49 pm [Report This]
John is dead, will Cole and Della get what they deserve. Poor Kate, not knowing what to feel about her father.
Date: 07/25/10 - 01:38 pm [Report This]
Never, ever go against your wife's feelings and intuition Adam. I love Hop Sing, they should have called him in the first place. As he said he takes care of the Cartwrights...all the Cartwrights. Great chapter, I'll feel better when John's definately buzzard bait.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 07/24/10 - 08:46 pm [Report This]
Oh snot, Ben should have shot John the day he caught him at High Sierra.
Date: 07/24/10 - 08:26 pm [Report This]
Love your descriptions. I could see Adam running around like a mad man. John is an evil, evil man, he's going to be nothing but trouble.
Date: 07/24/10 - 08:14 pm [Report This]
Oh boy another Adam and Kate story. Kate you have a very ornery patient on your hands.
Date: 07/24/10 - 07:34 pm [Report This]
WQW! Can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Working on the next chapter in their lives.
Date: 07/24/10 - 03:41 am [Report This]
Adam needs a wife who can take charge when needed and he sure does have one in Kate! Now, she just has to learn to accept help form the Cs - that's one of their best qualities! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review.
Date: 07/24/10 - 12:17 am [Report This]