great story
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I love a story in which Hoss gets a girl who's worthy of him, and given that Thor, Flower, and Squeak approve, it looks like Hoss is worthy of Dee as well. Thanks for a wonderful story ... I enjoyed it very much.
Date: 08/17/10 - 05:16 pm [Report This]
Peej, I loved this story as a WIP and loved it again the second time around! You brought such life to Dee and a perfect love for Hoss! Thank you for sharing your story with us!
Author's Response:
I can't believe you read this a second time! That makes me feel really good!
Date: 07/26/10 - 03:20 am [Report This]
You kept us guessing back and forth and voila, once again, Hoss gets the girl. The promise of this union seems most inspiring.
Thank you for a delightful tale.
Lillian
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for sticking with another of my "epics"!!!!
Date: 07/18/10 - 04:48 am [Report This]
This Dee is a whirlwind of activity and the Cartwrights surely found a ball of fire when they found her.
She's got Adam in a pique and her independence is but one of the many aspects of her personality that intrigue him.
A fantastic installment.
Thanks.
Author's Response:
On the surface, Dee is definitely a ball of fire. But, the trick is to peel back the layers of the onion to see what's at the core. Thanks for your good review!
Date: 07/18/10 - 04:18 am [Report This]
You've set up a mysterious mood and who knows where this Dee will take us and what we will find along the way.
Great intro.
Lillian
Author's Response:
Don't ya just love mysterious moods? Especially with a gal as mouthy as Dee! Thanks for your positive response.
Date: 07/18/10 - 03:43 am [Report This]
loved it, thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to give a positive post!
Date: 07/16/10 - 10:33 pm [Report This]
Peej, you have written another winner! I love how you put so much of yourself into the characters you create. You have a wonderful sense of humor and a lust for life and it shows in your writing. I appreciate you sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
I put myself, AG and you in here, gal! I know that you recognized YOU! LOL!
Date: 07/15/10 - 10:08 pm [Report This]
You stay true to the personalities of each of the Cartwrights and to the relationship they have.
Author's Response:
I tried to stay true. Your post proves that I accomplished it! Many thanks.
Date: 07/15/10 - 10:06 pm [Report This]
Love the way you introduce your characters and give us a little background on how they are a part of the Cartwright's life.
Author's Response:
As I see it, background stuff is often dull but very important. Otherwise we don't know what makes our characters tick! Thanks for such a positive response.
Date: 07/15/10 - 10:03 pm [Report This]
This story made me smile inside and out! I love to see the Cartwrights face a challenge, each in their own way. Peej, your stories are so relaxing to read because they're so well written: you've done all the right things as an author, nothing is confusing unless you want it to be as part of the story itself. Excellent tale! Anyone who reads it will love it!
Author's Response:
What a pat on the back coming from an author as good as YOU! Many thanks for your words of praise!
Date: 07/14/10 - 07:59 pm [Report This]