Ben would have gone to the ends of the earth for his sons. I like the brotherly love between Adam and Hoss. Thanks for sharing.
Oh poor Adam already at 10 years old having to act like a man...burying a body...taking care of his little brother and convincing him to help. Protecting Hoss when Cooper was with him in the barn...definitely a forshadowing of the amazing man he would become. And Hoss tenderhearted but tryng to be strong for Addy. Love this story Krystyna!
It's not often that a 'young Cartwrights' story has the drama, emotion and character development that are usually associated with the "grown-up" versions of our beloved characters - but you have captured the essences of Adam, Hoss and Ben wonderfully in this action-packed and suspenseful tale. The ending narrative is especially beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing, Krystyna! Bravo, bravo!
Excellent story about the oldest Cartwright boys!
that is a very wonderful story Thank you
Great Hoss and Adam story. Your words paint a beautiful picture, I could feel Adam aprehension and fear. Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful story,
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Thank you so much, Fanofoldtvshows, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
I loved it, thanks
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I really appreciated this review, Bertha, many thanks indeed.
